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  • Archive Re: Dragon Riders

    *Shoot!* Reva laid down. She was tired of standing. Staring absentmindedly, Reva reached behind her and stroked Yon's head. Are we there yet? For the fifteenth time - NO! Sheesh. ...

    Nov 30, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello World!

    Hey! I'm jumper. Welcome to YWS! This place is alot of fun. You can even write storybooks, post lyrics, and even critique other author's work. Oh, and it's a 2:1 ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Archive Re: Dragon Riders

    Reva watched out of sight as the shadow clan burned the fields down. She spit, disgusted. A cloaked man looked like he was giving orders. Reva instantly despised him. Savior ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members!

    Hi new members! I'm moon jumper, but just call me jumper - it's shorter. I'll probably find you and PM you personally, but if I don't - you can always ...

    Nov 28, 2008
  • Archive Re: Dragon Riders

    Cool. name: Reva   Age: (she doesn’t actually know but looks like 14-17 area)   Gender: female Creature: Gypsy Imp (not Chinese, though) Rank(if Dragon Rider): she's her own general ...

    Nov 27, 2008
  • Archive Re: Dragon Riders

    Um...Can I join? I know it's really kinda late, but I like this me back? ~jumper I already have a bio and pictures. And I'm reading this so I can ...

    Nov 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Her journal (Start of a short story)

    Hey. Just to let you know, that you need two reviews for every post. With that out of the way, on to the critique! 1) Checks - grammar, spelling, etc. ...

    Nov 27, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: MAFIA- little story

    Hmm. This is a rare subject. I have never seen anyone here write about the mafia. Very interesting. 1) Physical Together they got up and walked across the night time ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dragon Slayer's Son Part 1

    Welcome to YWS! Just to let you know, that for every post you need 2 reviews. It's one of the most important things around here. The beginning was a little ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Elements of Faerie.

    OOPS!!! Earth was already taken... Um...how about the "Past, Present, and Future"? That's all I could think of... 11/26 Nevermind this....

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Elements of Faerie.

    Kewleo! I want to do this! Name: Dawn Element: Earth Age: 14 Gender: Female Hobbies: Toying with her eerie, tiny flute Special: Has the ability to adapt to anything Disability: ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beginning of a story...

    Not shabby - By that I mean... AWESOME! Anyway, you give thorough descriptions and your writing is great! This is going to be a good story. If you need any ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Scorpius Malfoy/Rose Weasley

    That was good. There were a few words misspelled if I recall, and an adjective that was placed confusingly. But apart from that it was good. My friend at first ...

    Nov 25, 2008
  • Scripts Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur

    OMG! That was my birthday! Ridiculous! Why didn't I read this before! I love it SO MUCH! (I'm talking in ALL CAPS not screaming!) Favorite Part: PENGUIN ATTACK OH NOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Handkerchief

    Wow. That was really good. When I read it, it had a gentle rocking motion for me. I like it. Scratch that. I love it! You have a way with ...

    Nov 23, 2008


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